2015年6月英语四级考试作文卷一 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents' role in their children's growth. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。
2015年6月英语四级作文回归“图画式”。图画式第一篇，写父母在孩子成长过程中扮演的角色。如图所示”“妈妈，如你所愿我上了你为我选好的大学”。第一段描述图画，提出“的确父母在孩子成长过程中干涉太多”这一现象，第二段写各种干涉，举例论证指出利弊。第三段写学生自己的看法。 As is graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl istalking with her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I wasaccepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mother smilesand seems content with this result. Apparently, the cartoon aims toreveal the fact that a majority of modern parents play anincreasingly negative role in their children’s growth.
第一段三句话，描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。
There are several possible reasons accountable for thisphenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has onlyone child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentionson that child and exert much pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover,numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilled dreams byletting their children learn what they failed to learn and applyfor the college by which they failed to be accepted, because theyhave become richer and they believe that they have the power tomake what they wanted and want come true now(原因二). For instance, myuncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he wouldbecome a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But he madea fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my youngerbrother to practice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan ofsports, but now he has to play violin everyday unwillingly andofter quarrels with theirparents(举例：原来-然后-结局).
To sum up, it is unreasonable for parents to control theirchildren’s life(总结句). In order to help them grow happily andhealthily, parents are supposed to communicate with their kidsabout what they are really interested in(建议一，目的句型). Meanwhile, itis about time that parents let their kids make their ownchoices(建议二，“是时候”句型). Only in these ways will children grow in apsychologically happy environment and realize their owndreams.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid's understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。
作文大意：评论图中所示现代人的生活方式 翻译答案：
中国是世界上最古老的文明之一。构成现在世界基础的许多元素都起源于中国。中国现在拥有世界上发展最快的经济，并经历着一次新的工业革命。中国还启动了雄心勃勃的太空探索计划，其实包括到2020年建成一个太空站。目前，中国是世界上最大的出口国之一，并正在吸引大量外国投资。同时，它也在海外投资数十亿美元。2011年，中国超越日本成为第二大经济体。
China is one of the oldest cultures in the world, from whichmuch that constructs the foundation of the modern world is derived. China is witnessing the fastest development ofits economy and experiencing a new industrial revolution. Also, China has started the ambitious program forexploring the outer space, including to complete a space station by2020. Currently, being one of the largest exporters in the world,China is attracting massive foreign investment. Simultaneously, ithas invested billions of dollars overseas. In 2011, China surpassedJapan as the world’s second-largesteconomy.
解析：前两句话都是简单句，抓住共同点China,可以用定从合并在一起;
第三句两个简单句并列;
第四句注意2020是将来时间，非谓语应采取to do 形式，如果用谓语要用将来完成时;
第五句简单句并列，为避免单调，可以采取非谓语结构
第六、第七句简单句
