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标题: 2014年12月英语四级冲刺:作文终极预测 [打印本页]

作者: loveyunfei365    时间: 2014-12-11 21:48
标题: 2014年12月英语四级冲刺:作文终极预测

  预测作文话题:

  Youngsters’ Worship

  1. 大学生现在过分崇拜大明星

  2. 分析产生这一现象的原因

  3. 我的看法

  作文范文:

  Youngsters’ Worship(大学生追星)

  Nowadays, star-worshiping is popular among teenagers, especially many university students.

  Why? When it comes to the symptoms of worshiping a star, the main factor I’d like to mention is imitation. With a blind love for their idols, teenagers firmly believe that their choices are the best. As a result, the stars’ clothes, hairstyles and hobbies, as well as their behaviors in public, are closely observed or followed, though, to some extent, they may be considered improper or even ridiculous.

  In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future.



作者: loveyunfei365    时间: 2014-12-11 21:49

        预测作文话题:

  Free Admission to Parks

  1. 越来越多的公园免费开放,目的是什么

  2. 也会带来一些问题

  3. 你的看法

  作文范文:

  Free Admission to Parks

  To encourage people to go outside and relax, a mounting number of parks offer free admission now. People benefit from it, especially during these tough economic times. With free entry, more people will have the opportunity for affordable vacations for families, taking pleasure in the natural landscape.

  Fresh air and landscapes in parks are good for people. However, too many people

  flocking into parks might not be so good for the parks.

  For example, some visitors leave their garbage behind, which may cause environmental pollution. And people’s barbecues and stamping will also bring damage to the grassland and other greenflies in parks.

  As a university student, I’m in favor of free admission to parks. Free entry to parks not only saves people’s expenditure, but also makes things fairer — people like the poor and students can go to parks frequently as well. On the other hand, visitors should be informed to preserve the environment while enjoying the beauty of the nature.



作者: loveyunfei365    时间: 2014-12-13 12:34

预测作文话题:

  Opening Psychological Courses

  1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程

  2. 我对这一问题的看法

  作文范文:

  Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.

  On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.

  In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.

  点评:

  首段提出主题,其中第二句为过渡句,引出下文;第二段提出三点同意的理由;最后一段得出结论,与第一段首句呼应,其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。

  范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议,并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先,目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次,教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后,给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。

  第二段第一点中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”,修饰两个名词词组,对比鲜明,at the moment表示“现在”,in the future表示“将来”,open a door for…表示“开启了……之门”;第二点中的regulate表示“调节,控制”;第三点中的conducive表示“有益于……的”,后接介词to。



作者: loveyunfei365    时间: 2014-12-16 16:55

    无论如何,创造财富的物质资源,不论其初始分配如何,最终是要通过各种各样的渠道,流入到具有企业家精神的人手里,这是自由市场的一个基本趋势。这些人获得对他人的财富的支配权、使用权,以之为自己创造财富,并积累财富。这正是自由市场具有效率的根源。它可以动态地、自发地把资源从资源利用效率较低的人手里转移到资源利用效率较高的人手里。中国人讲“富不过三代”,其中有一些无奈,但也揭示了自由市场的精髓所在:财富本身并不能充当财富的保障。因为,财富本来就不是财富创造出来的。

  参考答案:

  However,no matter how they are allocated in the firset place,the material resources which can create fortune will flow into entrepreneurs'hands eventually through various channels.It is the basic tendency of free market.Those people acquire the right of disposal and the right of use of other people's wealth to create and accumulate wealth for them.This is the very source of efficiency of free market.It can dynamically and spontaneously transfers the resources from the people who are inefficient in resourses use to the people who are efficient in resources use.There is a Chinese saying that “the rich can not last three generations”.It has no alternative but also reveals some pith and marrow of the free market:the fortune itself can not be be guraantee of the fortune,because the fortune is not created by fortune.

  考点分析:

  中国人讲“富不过三代”,其中有一些无奈,但也揭示了自由市场的精髓所在。

  分析:

  这里“富不过三代”的俗语可以翻出它的意思即可,后面的“无奈…但…”可以用“have no alternative but also”这种结构。







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